One of my friends felt that this story was very edgy, racy and scandalous. Personally, I thought I was rather easy on Loki... But to each their own. I can write nearly anything after the two scenes in the Playing with Tigers series that had given me trouble, so long as there's a story to write in there as well. I had asked people to give it a once over, and after I fired a few bullets and stabbed a guy they finally agreed. If not for one of the two people that read my work before it's published, the story would've ended after the first night that Kyo has Loki. He demanded more, and here we are. I don't plan on doing another bondage short anytime soon, but I would be willing to add more to this one possibly. I just have to publish the second PWT book first.
Speaking of which, since you gave enough of a crap to stop by my blog, help yourself to a free copy of my novel. Smashwords will still ask for card info, but put the code below in at checkout and it will be discounted to 100% off. That needs considerable editing and also stars a bisexual young man, so there are many scenes with him and a woman, but I tried to keep it as even as I could throughout. The final edit of that is pending, but the only reviewer who had the balls to say they enjoyed the book said he couldn't wait for the second novel, and I like to reward anyone who gives me my much needed feedback.
Coupon code for Playing with Tigers (be careful the book is insanely long) -